NCIS SB004 Baikonur

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Screenplay

HIROMI and GEORGIANA come off the train, following a PORTER who is helping them with the large ISF TRUNK using a large dolly. They walk across the platform, and out into the sunshine. As HIROMI and the PORTER move the trunk into a large van, GEORGIANA runs around, obviously curious and glad to be outside again.

They see the town of Baikonur (montage).

Then we transition to the pre-flight press conference.


NCIS SB004 Baikonur


Direction

We fade back in to the train arriving in Baikonur. I think this is a new station, much more modernized than the one that currently exists in Baikonur. The idea is that the space industry has been good for local economic development, and Baikonur has grown and modernized, even though many things are still the same.

HIROMI and GEORGIANA come off the train, following a PORTER who is helping them with the large ISF TRUNK using a large dolly. They walk across the platform, and out into the sunshine. As HIROMI and the PORTER move the trunk into a large van, GEORGIANA runs around, obviously curious and glad to be outside again.

The PORTER closes up the van and HIROMI follows GEORGIANA towards the BAIKONUR MONUMENT near the train station. HIROMI is looking around, GEORGIANA runs in circles around the monument, looks into the grass up close, and other things you might expect a 7-yr-old to do in a public space.

Here, we move into a montage of touring Baikonur town. In the montage, we see several elements: Visiting several of the major landmarks in Baikonur. Buying a souvenir box at a stand in the market square. Planting a tree along the cosmonaut trees walk near the "Cosmonaut Hotel" in Baikonur.


(Ros' comment)GEORGIANA puts her hand against the launch statue and looks up at the sky. Follow her gaze up and begin voice over of press conference.


At a press conference, HIROMI, SERGEI, and GEORGIANA are all present, but GEORGIANA is coloring on a set of space coloring pages at the table...

Press conference starts a new scene.

At the press conference:

(move this to press conference page) Camera flashes

Focus on a table with a child's drawing Georgy's hands drawing a picture:

She looks up. Sees the press looking at her. Some frowning some smiling. Turns to her mom.

Cut to outside view - press room in cosmonaut hotel

The scene closes with the buses leaving the hotel on the road to the spaceport. GEORGIANA can be seen peeking out of the back window of one of the buses.

Montage on way to space port: GEORGIANA can be seen peeking out of the back window of one of the buses.

Storyboards

Sound

MUSIC: "Orient" by "Lulo" from "Collage".

Another montage with little ambient sound.