NCIS SB025 Family Dinner and END TITLES

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Screenplay

The scene fades back in. The dinner is made, and all of the colonists are in the DINING ROOM. The scene collapses to one side of the screen, and we see the principle titles on the right.

From "The Landing" story -- want to reorder/reassign these lines:

"What did you say the name of the colony was?" Mr Suriwa asked.

"Satori" Hiromi said

"I thought that we had decided on Ataraxia!" Emerson cut in." Similar context without the Buddist overtones."

"Wait a second." Sarah chimed in," weren't we gonna call it Amistad or something?"

"You mean like the slave ship?" Emerson asked.

"What about Union?" Sara countered.

"You want I should just paint a fist on the wall. Union, a fitting name for a totalitarian state."

"Well Ataraxia sounds like some kind of sickness." Sarah countered sticking out her tongue.

"Ataraxia is a greek word that means freedom from care and worry. Freedom is what this colony is all about and we already decided on it. It's Ataraxia."

"I like Quivira" Anya said.

"How about troika?" Timothy said as he bounced forward turning to get a view of them all with his camera.

"We already decided before we left Earth. Was I the only one paying attention at that staff meeting? We decided on Ataraxia colony."

"Now now" John said, " We'll discuss it in our next colony meeting. "


ROB:
[? a short speech before the meal]

As people start to eat -- so we hear table noises.

TIM:
We still haven't agreed on a name for this colony, you know...
HIROMI:
I thought we had decided on...
ANYA:
No, it was going to be..."
JOSH:
(laughs)
Well this is a fine way to start!

Everyone is eating by then.

GEORGIANA:
Mommy, can I have some cake?
HIROMI
Why, yes, honey, you can.

The screen fades out, and the full detailed credits start to roll to the end.

VARIATION:

EVERYONE ANIMATED TALKING AROUND THE TABLE.

HIROMI PULLS OUT A CHOCOLATE CAKE

HIROMI: Would you like a piece of cake Georgy?

GEORGIANA: Yes, please.

GEORGY STUFFING HER FACE.

GEORGIANA: Can I have some more please

HIROMI: Yes Georgiana. Tim, would you like some.

TIM: Yes, thank you

trails off.

NCIS SB025 Family Dinner and END TITLES


Direction

The scene fades back in. The dinner is made, and all of the colonists are in the DINING ROOM. The scene collapses to one side of the screen, and we see the principle titles on the right.

[This needs work]

Storyboards

Sound

MUSIC: "Family House" by "Fridance" from "Mission #1"

Initially, there is dialog and foley during the preparation and serving of dinner. We get different voices as the camera moves and we pick up the conversations, ending with Georgiana's line. When the credits come, though, the ambient sound fades slowly out.